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S.K. Illes is new to Demensions with this first of many chapters to "The Invaders," a story that reads like a Jean Auel or Native American novel, but is actually based on another world altogether. |
Spring was early that year. The tumtum trees were in full bloom, and by the beginning of the fourth month the hruja grass was ankle deep. Loora was surveying the herd of Onaga currently under her care, looking for ticks and other parasites and checking their over all condition. Their short, reddish coats were sleek and shiny with good health, and their short black horns were smooth and clean. Since the area where they were grazing was getting short, she started them moving with small yips and slight waves of her arms. "Yip, yah! Hoi, hoi!" got them moving. They ambled agreeably along, in no hurry, snatching mouthfuls of grass as they went. The animals' 4 inch wide cloven hooves had done little more than temporarily flatten the tough, springy grass. When they settled again, about 1/4 mile down the border creek, she toured the perimeter of the herd, checking the pasture for weeds and other things bad for the Onaga, like holes or burrows and noxious plants. There had been an infestation of Zaxa three years ago that had nearly killed a quarter of the herd from diarrhea, so she was very watchful. When they had spread out to graze and were settled, Loora found a boulder to perch on and eat, fishing out of her belt pouch a hunk of Onaga jerky to chew on, washing it down with water from the skin bottle slung across her neck and shoulder. When she finished eating, she used her teasel brush to groom her fur as far as she could reach, including and especially her tail, a most lush and beautiful appendage, and one she was justly proud of. Her ruff, too, was thick and shiny, and darker than most of the family, and she liked to design torques and necklaces to show it off, in addition to those she made for trade. The rest of the clan was spending the day giving the den its spring cleaning, and boy! it needed it! After six months of damp and cold weather, the den had collected a thick layer of dirt, fur, and unfinished projects that needed to be shoveled out and sorted. Loora's own bunk and area was being left for her to do, when she was releived of herd duty, but everyone else was hard at it. In the evening, there would be an exchange of unfinished projects among those who wanted something new to work on. Of course, some items were very private, being one person's special craft project. Loora's own specialty was bronze armbands and torques. She did some of the best etching of designs among the clans, and the Lakarn, her own Clan, were very proud of her. While watching the herd this day, she contemplated a new design using a stylized pattern of the tumtum blossoms. At the den, Luna had discovered a packet of herbs that had been kicked under one of the bunks, and was almost unidentifiable from the layer of dust on it. "I wonder what that is" she mumbled to herself as she picked it up. She shook it and brushed at it with a brush (made from Onaga hair). "Oh! It's lisel, one of those herbs I use for stews and soups. I was almost out. Glad to find it."
Lur had found a forgotten bag of unfinished carvings in his area, and as he contemplated them, he considered that they might make good projects for the less skilled to work with. He would offer them tonight to the family. Luba, meanwhile, had accumulated a pile of leather gear in need of cleaning and repair that would keep her busy for a week, at least. Well, she thought with a silent sigh, that's what spring cleaning was about. Anyway, it would mean less new gear to be made from scratch. Bless the Goddess for the little things, as well as the large. Lago was watching the herd. The current pasture was alongside one of the woodland areas used for firewood and gathering herbs, as well as hunting small game. On one trip around the outskirts of the herd, his hunter's eye noticed a trail of footprints paralleling the edge of the woodlot. He examined it carefully, but found only unfamiliar prints. Of course, he knew all those of the family, as he had studied them since his birth or theirs. He also knew, 'tho not as well, most of those from the surrounding domains. He set out to follow them, to find out where they led, but he could go only so far as long as he was herder. The Onaga came first. So he returned to the herd, and spent his time watching for edible birds to try his sling on, and gathering some wood at the forests' edge for firewood, and other things like carving and handles. Meanwhile he pondered the possible meaning of the tracks. Every individual of the Trakhor, "the people", had a distinctive footprint, and a hunter must know most of those he is likely to come into contact with regularly. What would strangers be doing on the border of his clan's domain without his knowing about it? Before the evening meal, Lolo, as alpha male, was told about the prints, and at dinner, since all were adults, he told everyone. They were all asked to watch for anything strange. This was a normal routine, but since something had already been noticed, this was a special alert.
Over the next two weeks, little was seen except some sign of unusual activity in the woods. This might be due to some larger game animals or to strangers in the area. |
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